And ask me , “are you fine?”
I answered in a loud voice
They told me not to do more noise
My mother ran and came in my room
And ask me I was talking to whom ?
I said I was just sleeping here
I saw someone roaming there...!
She went and closed the door
I saw the light of stars on the floor
I thought as they were calling me
To talk with them pleasantly ....!
I stood to the window seeing out
They shook their hands ........
And began to shout,
As then my mother got me up in the morning
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आता हळु हळू एक करायचे. कवितेतली शब्द संख्या कमी करत आणायची. कमीत कमी शब्दात जेव्हा जास्तीत जास्त सांगता येते ना तेव्हा ती कविता सफ़ल ठरते....
मन:पूर्वक शुभेच्छा !!
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